From 55a43bb5bc8dcc90c8308f09531d6ace874ef4c0 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Tom Henderson Date: Mon, 23 Feb 2015 12:31:31 -0800 Subject: [PATCH] fix tutorial typos (found by Renan) --- doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst | 8 ++++---- doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst | 2 +- 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-) diff --git a/doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst b/doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst index aea9e9c98..a5a34f9ec 100644 --- a/doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst +++ b/doc/tutorial/source/building-topologies.rst @@ -24,7 +24,7 @@ point-to-point topologies, we will see equivalent CSMA topology helpers in this section. The appearance and operation of these helpers should look quite familiar to you. -We provide an example script in our examples/tutorial} directory. This script +We provide an example script in our ``examples/tutorial`` directory. This script builds on the ``first.cc`` script and adds a CSMA network to the point-to-point simulation we've already considered. Go ahead and open ``examples/tutorial/second.cc`` in your favorite editor. You will have already seen @@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ Lastly, you can look back at the node that originated the echo $ tcpdump -nn -tt -r second-0-0.pcap -and see that the echoed packet arrives back at the source at 2.007602 seconds, +and see that the echoed packet arrives back at the source at 2.017607 seconds, .. sourcecode:: text @@ -884,7 +884,7 @@ that we will connect via the point-to-point link. Next, we see an old friend. We instantiate a ``PointToPointHelper`` and set the associated default ``Attributes`` so that we create a five megabit per second transmitter on devices created using the helper and a two millisecond -delay on channels created by the helper. We then ``Intall`` the devices +delay on channels created by the helper. We then ``Install`` the devices on the nodes and the channel between them. :: @@ -1261,7 +1261,7 @@ probably understand what is going on and find the IP echo request and response packets in this trace. We leave it as an exercise to completely parse the trace dump. -Now, look at the pcap file of the right side of the point-to-point link, +Now, look at the pcap file of the left side of the point-to-point link, .. sourcecode:: bash diff --git a/doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst b/doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst index 9dbbdfe58..bde67dab8 100644 --- a/doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst +++ b/doc/tutorial/source/conceptual-overview.rst @@ -92,7 +92,7 @@ access* communication medium. This gives us Ethernet-like functionality. Net Device ++++++++++ -It used to be the case that if you wanted to connect a computers to a network, +It used to be the case that if you wanted to connect a computer to a network, you had to buy a specific kind of network cable and a hardware device called (in PC terminology) a *peripheral card* that needed to be installed in your computer. If the peripheral card implemented some networking function,